All Comments on 'A Summer of Submission Pt. 05'

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paulb85paulb8510 months ago

A very erotic story, beautifully told.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The fact she finds it difficult to transition from submissive to independent, tells me the DOM is not doing their aftercare properly. You can't just *end* a scene and expect everything to go immediately to normal.

TwoGunKidtgkTwoGunKidtgk10 months ago

Damn you and your short chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well, Julie got what she thinks she Needs & wants. As always you have left me wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yes I want and need more and wish my mistress was a lot closer cause this is killing me to behave and not ask and just well you left me wanting a lot more you have me wanting be bad

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Julie was put into the "rest" position (on her knees with hands behind her head). Marika as well. Till Sam got back. Marika should have been left in that position while Julie was punished. Julie's punishment should have been more drawn out and varied. Chapter should have ended with Julie's total submission with none of the joking and laughing before that.

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Dear readers, Part 8 and the final chapter of A Summer of Submission has been submitted for review. In it, Julie's friend comes for a visit and arrives earlier than expected. A big surprise awaited. I hope you enjoy it. From some of the comments I gather this story is no...