All Comments on 'A Surprise Ending...'

by wikidkul

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26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Better

Better than I epected. As a cynical LW reader, I expected her to have another man.

Pinto931Pinto931about 2 months ago

Stories written in the third person very rarely work and this for me this one doesn’t. Also what was the surprise ending?

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