All Comments on 'A Swinging Affair Ch. 02'

nicely composed

Nicely paced adult story, respectful and quite believable.

The story was well crafted and well written. However. For me, the anal scene was a downside in a Loving Wives story as I find buggery about as erotic as toothache, but I’m sure that others will disagree. I found the story line a bit pedestrian. It could have been spiced up with some lies, deceit, half truths, other other such drama to give the story some ‘edge’. This series needs to have a thread which weaves between the episodes and couples. Perhaps some of the couples are already cheating? Perhaps there is some history like a love child which a husband is not aware of. In other words I need a storyline which will hook me into reading the next episode, otherwise it just becomes a series of unrelated bonking sessions and I begin to yawn. The best stories have a MacGuffin (see Wikipaedia), to provide a thread on which the story is built. Anyway, well done. I will read episode 3.

This story held my attention from beginning to end and hope to see how it weaves together the other couples. You could write on this group for a long, long time.