All Comments on 'A Tale of Submission Ch. 03'

Really?

Most all of the dialogue is stiff. The sexual dialogue is working too hard to be dirty and ends up as course and not sexy at all. Both people are experienced, but the speed at which everything progressed pushed me away instead of drawing me in. When my what the hells greatly outnumber the oh yeahs, I can't score high. This will probably work for the fast trip to the spank bank fans.

I loved the story...complex and well-thought out in Lei's submissive character development! Don't worry about the "trolls" who live to be the first to enter negative comments on new stories. They probably haven't read the preceding chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!