by ChaCha69
I hated that you used a single initial for the participants. Try using the names of your characters. It wont kill you to type the whole name and would improve your story immensely.
Had me on a roller coaster with your "There is something extremely exciting about putting another man's cock in . . ." Top erotica for me. Thanks.
Pretty hot story, but just give characters random names instead of just letters. Just throws off the story a little bit, other than that it was really hot!
The first paragraph with initials instead of names I was out. Took me out of the story.
Lazy and moronic. Had potential until you started using letters. Some people will fawn over anything, and anyone liking this will probably also accept instant powdered noodles n' cheese as gourmet. Good god....all you had to do was use "search and replace" if you were just too lazy to type the names in. Being so lazy that you couldn't even do that.....means that your story structure and your overall effort reflect that same laziness. Fail...fail...fail