All Comments on 'A Taste of Slavery Ch. 30'

Well written, covers their emotional struggle well. I continue to be impressed by your work. Thank you for sharing it!

Thank you so much for continuing this wonderful series. The plot twists just keep getting better. The characters are fantastic.

I just now got caught up to this story and have been reading it for several days. It is one of the best on here. The fact that it is based in Fresno where I live is an added bonus. Looking forward to more.

The story started out very nice, narrative, plot and character development. But it has grown into so much more. Very good to talk about feelings after a rape. The story has become dear to me.

I am a rape victim, I can assure you the last thing i wanted was more sex even from the one i love. The trauma of rape is deeply emotional, needs counseling and time to recover. I applaud you for taking on this topic and educating on self protection. I did and do practice all of these things and agree they have made me feel empowered. I go to the gun range on a regular basis.

There are many errors regarding Master and slave here, yet it is a fantasy so why not/? The slaves continue to top and direct Master, never permitted. The free for all between both slaves is not permitted, The constant error of sir drives me crazy, it is Sir with a capital S, Master with a capital M out of respect, always.

For the most part I enjoy your story lines.

OK TF you got me. I will defer to Daniella on the finer points but I do know that for me, it was a hugely powerful read. After a few chapters of what at times felt like housekeeping and a touch of foreshadowing, BAM! You hit us with this.

Yes this supposed hard arsed hooker was sniffling and snuffling all through this chapter.

There's no way this would get published on Lush and given some of the things you've said about non-con and enjoying it in the end, I'm surprised this got through.

Kudos to you for taking on an impossible subject, to hard and it's rejected, too soft and it's not realistic enough.

The one thing I will say is that everyone would react differently, for Lucia to say they must be fucked is possibly wrong, because they may do it to the detriment of their health, trying to prove that they are still good slaves. I don't disagree that he should ensure they know they are loved, but it's possibly also another sign that Scott is a weak master (lower case m used on purpose). With that in mind, I would like to know more about what is going through his head, because I'm damned sure he would have questions running through at 100mph.

I must admit a couple of things made me smile. Burglarized (even without a z) is almost archaic now, at least over here. And them reaching speeds of almost 100mph... ok, if you insist that's fast. hahaha.

I know, 3 chapters behind still, but catching up slowly. Life's busy, but thanks, keep putting them out, I'll keep catching up.

I was a rape victim too, childhood sexual abuse. Individuals react differently to rape and abuse but there are recognised sets of behaviours/reactions to that abuse. Sadly feeling guilty and dirty is a common reaction. For my part I was thankful that I didn’t end up completely frigid, I can’t comment on whether or not I would have been interested in having sex with anyone, I wasn’t in a relationship with anyone. After I got married (for the 2nd time) and explored BDSM with my husband I was able to exorcise more of my personal demons/ hang ups from that time. Having the option to be sexually submissive in a safe loving relationship helped me to heal. Some things never go away, fortunately it’s not an everyday issue for me anymore, so along with others I’d like to thank you for tackling this subject. I really enjoy your stories although for what are probably obvious reasons I either skip stories or chapters in stories that have incest in them because it triggers bad memories.

I really appreciate you sharing your stories.

*virtual hugs* Tess (UK)

I think Dr. Sturgis agreed to accept Lucia as a patient rather than a client. Medicine is poorly suited to the business model, as much as some think or hope it can be reduced to dollars and widgets. If physicians operated solely from a capitalist model, Dr. Sturgis would instantly accepted a full pay patient. Off soapbox. Really like the story.

I imagine many readers are imagining the appropriate ending for Jack. I think Mistress Dark breaking him and turning him into worm-like masochist would be nice.

Second time thru. . . .You are one gutsy writer, DEAR AUTHOR. Your sensitivity to JULIA'S and LISA'S rape both physically and mentally, was still very compelling, whether right or wrong. Loved the support of the LA based characters. Just another outstanding read !

A powerfully brutal chapter. I found it riveting as well as poignant. Brought a tear to my eye. I sure hope you plan a particularly gruesome and violent death for Jack.