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- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoSecond time thru. . . .Perhaps BDSM'S strong approach to slavery is influencing me, but I continue to be pleased to see MASTER take control from JULIA. Leaving out the incest, I loved this chapter. Back to basics of your good read, DEAR AUTHOR. Solid 5 star, minus incest.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoIf Scott truly loves Julia why does he coerce her into surrendering her self respect - surely the single characteristic that distinguishes a Voluntary Submissive from an Owned Slave? Lisa has admitted that, although reluctantly, she would have sex with her parents if told to; while Julia has always shown that she considers it a hard limit. The agreement reached after resuming their submission actually precluded sex with Lisa and Julia's parents.
Having read this section again, it seems to me that as the girls submission gave Scott access to his earlier loves - Cindy and Zoe - he feels less attached to his submissive and wishes to subvert any remaining free will. What a jerk.
Mike (uk)
Anonymousabout 1 year agoVery good to see Shasta coming into her Dominance & hence self-confidence - or is it the other way round?
Hate the incest (whether Cali calls it so or not) & mindfuckery - sure the girls could have safeworded, but were emotionally blackmailed not to do so. No communication, no discussion about changing prior agreements. Very poor show, Scott.
Still, 5*, bit reluctantly this time.
Dixon (UK)
Anonymousover 1 year agoreply to "Hey Tess"
California law does not say what happened to Julia and Lisa is not incest, but that it is not illegal under California Law. However it is still incest by any civilised society's standards - and your characters are civilised, if unorthodox.
Refusing to call it incest because it is not illegal is just a cop out. An out of character episode.
lazy_readerabout 2 years agoJulia and Lisa should kick their Master to the curb. I read this story as it came out. I tolerated some of the BS like we see in this chapter. Binge reading is different. Scott and his two slaves were happy and could have remained that way indefinitely. The incest, the sex with other men (ordered by Scott!!!), later the clitoral hood piercings, the "let's get airtight", the BS. Reduced my ratings of all remaining chapters to one star.
