All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 08'

A great follow up in the best traditions of the story... I really can never wait for the next chapter after I have read the previous one... Beth is so sexy but I want Pam to lose it too! Keep em coming!

I'm sure Jack won't disappoint. Another awesome chapter Jack! Looking forward to the next.

OMG you way to write is unbelievable. I loved all the parts from the beggining.

Well done, once again Jack! Please don't give up on this series, it's the best I've ever read. Looking forward to the next installment.

Really loved it. keep em coming this is the best series i have ever read. I want Pam & Ron to do it!

This is such a great series. I wish I didnt have to wait so long for this installment. Jack, I rip off my panties and start fingering myself the minute I start reading. I find I tease my boyfriend a lot more than I used to, and try to keep his cock stiff as often as possible. Please write more and more soon, and the kinkier the better!

or go molest my girlfriend, because I was reading this at work! And if you think I was going to wait to read it until I had some privacy, then you're just not addicted to JackKing's exhibitionist epic the way I am. I kept having to get up and do things in the office to avoid giving the impression of being glued to the screen, but that left me with the same problem Ron has been having for most of the storyline--what to do with my obvious (well, maybe not QUITE so obvious as Ron's...!) bulge.

Thanks to Jack for getting this series back on track. If we can't stand the delays, maybe we'll just be forced to take keyboard in hand (releasing whatever's "in hand" whilst reading, heh heh...!) and write our own homages. Which wouldn't be a bad thing: in fact, just what Literotica is about, unleashing creative passions.

this is the best series ever. It's amazing how you express the view points of the characters so clearly! and transition from one character to another so smoothly. Great story! I wish Could write. Good Job!

Pam really needs it- I hope she gets it in the next chapter. Jack, write faster.

Hell's bells, another blinding chapter, can't wait for more! keep em comin!

What a wonderful return! Thankyou Jack. I imagined a lot of things about future episodes but did not expect to see Courtney & Shannon again. Keep 'em coming - it's great writing and very suspenseful.

Don't y'all think this would make a breakthrough masterpiece of an adult movie?

Pure genius!

Thanks Jack - hope we don't have to wait as long for the next installment! But you're the man - so do it at your own pace! The introduction of Courtney & Shannon leave many possibilities - but in the end I assume you know that we want to see Ron fuck Pam and Beth and Amy at the same time. Maybe you need to introduce another male character to take some of the pressure off Ron? I'll volunteer!

Can't wait to see where Jack takes the story next! Wherever it does go I am sure it will be superb.

Is it wrong to ask when the next chapter is planned for????

It's the not knowing which is killing me!

Awelcome return, I've been waiting for chapter 8 for what seems like forever, but it was definately worth it!! Keep up the good work, but please don't make us wait too long!!

I appreciate the feedback on my efforts.

I sent in chapter 9 today. It should post sometime next week.

Chapters 8 and 9 represent all I have written to date. As much as I'd like to crank out chapter 10 in a few days, realistically, it isn't going to happen. I'll work on it as I can.

I think I know where I am headed, but if any of you would like to offer some juicy scenarios for Ron and his friends, I always appreciate something clever.

Thanks for your patience as I write the next chapter.

Jack

hey jack i've got an idea for a really wacky scenerio for ron and company, but it's just so insane that i'm not sure if the mass audience will be able to handle it, or you, for that matter, if you're not prone to extremely insane and wacky scenarios. if so, discontinue reading at this point. ok, so i guess you kept reading. good. now how about this for the next installment of your story: ron... ejaculates! yes, i know it's crazy, but i thought maybe you should throw in some...sex(?) in the next chapter just to switch things up from chapter 8 where no one actually got any sexing at all. if i didn't know better, i'd say you were some kind of tease or something. you've created a monster here, jack, and now you've got to feed it. remember the old chinese prover: "he who makes me really horny with his wacky stories had sure as shit better at least include some sexin in the next chapter".

Excellent as always. Each chapter seems to exceed the one before it.

Great stories... I wish the next chapter would arrive though! Come on Jack put us out of our misery. Anything would be good!!!

As an older and lustful woman I am impressed by the insight and repression your story continues to exhibit. I have been in the position of Pam on more than one occasion, and understand her temptation and stubborn resistance to sample the obvious talents of a familiar but shy younger man. In my case a co-worker and a neighbour's son were the best two. Keep the story going, the slow burn style generates enormous heat and moisture, I can vouch for that.

Really impressive how you keep edging the story forward. (Pun intended) And how you keep it all straight and easy to follow.

The occasional typo and spelling goofs are easily forgiven and quickly forgotten.

Can't wait to see what happens when Amy leaves ;->