All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 13'

by JackKing

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BGeorgeBGeorgeabout 13 years ago
Teasingly awesome!

Great to see another chapter of this classic! Very HOT!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent again

Thanks for continuing,I think you have a real following that cant wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Can't wait to see the next chapter. I check your page every day.

morph99morph99about 13 years ago

Fantastic to have another chapter, can't wait for the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
So worth the wait

Who else could sustain such an erotic scenario across 7 pages...and a gratifyingly crushing let down to keep us hungry for the next encounter! I hope your real life leaves a little space for writing - give the maestro room to work everybody! Thanks as ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Woooooo!

My favorite series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great job

Thanks for writing more. Love the series. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Amazing story!

I hope to see his orgasm's get denied for longer and longer. :)

margarveymargarveyabout 13 years ago

This is one of the most perfectly erotic stories on this site - I'm so glad you took it back up again. Thanks so much, and PLEASE keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent, thanks for the latest entry

Another wonderful chapter. Thanks for continuing to add onto the story, please keep it going. I eagerly await more chapters. Best series on the site, hands down.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Your series is awesome, man. I hope Ch. 14 is on its way soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing!

Please keep 'em cummin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I feel bad for Ron

It's really too much. He must go crazy after that

Great job as usual, jack.

Hoe about a sequel to the Trick or treat story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Simply awesome!

Thanks Jack for another fantastic chapter.

This story is the first one I check for an update every single time I go on this site. It's just incredibly well described, time seems to slow down exactly the same way it does for Ron ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful...

...series! Never read any erotic literature as amazing as what you put here. I hope, somebody makes a movie (or a trilogie) out of that: Could be the best porn movie ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

Once again an absolutely amazing story <3 Post the next one as soon as you can! I really want to find out how his adventures end ;)

Thumper17Thumper17almost 13 years ago
Wow

That was perfection. I hope that bitch Beth gets her "cum-uppance" soon. constantly interrupting Ron's fun time the way she has.

Eagerly awaiting the continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

The only story I check for updates on. Brilliant. I want more more more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing Story

What an incredible story- I'm always checking in for updates as well. Keep up the great work, Jack.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow

This tale keeps getting better and better. It has given my wife and I untold hours of pleasure!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Brilliant

The patience shown by the author is good but mine is running out. Plz post 14

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Best Series Ever

The build up is amazing! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
You are the best

Oh my... This story is unbelievable. I can't wait to the next chapter... Ron is so lucky :) I hope you'll post it soon :P

Thx to share this with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More please!

I check out the site every few days just to see if Jack has written Ch. 14... Simply can't wait. This series is the best thing ever on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Brilliant

150,264 words of magnificent erotic tale. Have had hours of fun with my girl reading this while playing with each other. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great way to expand to other characters

This tease will last a while... Fantastico

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing!

Your stories are truly amazing, such an incredible turn on. Cannot wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Anticipation

this is actually driving me crazy

please bring out ch.14!

such an awesome series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please hurry and write the next chapter! I check this site daily just to see if the new one is out yet, I've read the entire series 3 times over while I've been waiting. Neeeed the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I want more!!!

Awesome story! Keep me coming back for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Checking in every once in a while for #14. Thank you for the exceptional stories.

guy4fun46guy4fun46over 12 years ago
Suspence

Great Story really well writen.

Cant wait for more Please dont take to long

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

bloody brilliant - very well written - loving the tease which always leaves me frustrated - cant wait for #14

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So amazing

I love all the chapters in this story, but this is my favorite. The part where she "loses" the shampoo is only beaten by the shaving. More Sue in the future chapter please!

Advice_GirlAdvice_Girlover 10 years ago
If I could be Sue.

My imagination runs wild... A guy like Ron...tied to a chair...naked and ready... Oh My God.....

How erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dear dumbass annony two words

It's a story! OK 3 words. The two words would be Fuck you! I gave this a 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just... Just class.

On Cialis vs a ridiculously sexy woman:

Of course, given the nonstop stimulation he'd endured throughout their vacation, Beth's observation would not have passed as a scientific confirmation of the pill's impact.

No shit. Really. No shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bring back sue

You need to bring back sue. This is the only chapter that I read over and over again. You're a great writer, but some of us are not into the incestuous genre - but love the gorgeous aspect. Just my thoughts..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Where is chapter 12?

Goes from Chapter 11 to 13, but no 12. They only thing you get is a preview in 11

Is good but missing 12 spoils it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You really need to bring Sue back. She was your hottest character

EasterbilbyEasterbilbyover 1 year ago

This is by far my favourite series on Literotica. I love every chapter and re-read it on a regular basis. You should release it as a book somewhere for sale!

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