by JackKing
This is by far my favourite series on Literotica. I love every chapter and re-read it on a regular basis. You should release it as a book somewhere for sale!
Goes from Chapter 11 to 13, but no 12. They only thing you get is a preview in 11
Is good but missing 12 spoils it.
You need to bring back sue. This is the only chapter that I read over and over again. You're a great writer, but some of us are not into the incestuous genre - but love the gorgeous aspect. Just my thoughts..
On Cialis vs a ridiculously sexy woman:
Of course, given the nonstop stimulation he'd endured throughout their vacation, Beth's observation would not have passed as a scientific confirmation of the pill's impact.
No shit. Really. No shit.
It's a story! OK 3 words. The two words would be Fuck you! I gave this a 5
My imagination runs wild... A guy like Ron...tied to a chair...naked and ready... Oh My God.....
How erotica.
I love all the chapters in this story, but this is my favorite. The part where she "loses" the shampoo is only beaten by the shaving. More Sue in the future chapter please!
bloody brilliant - very well written - loving the tease which always leaves me frustrated - cant wait for #14
Great Story really well writen.
Cant wait for more Please dont take to long
Checking in every once in a while for #14. Thank you for the exceptional stories.
Please hurry and write the next chapter! I check this site daily just to see if the new one is out yet, I've read the entire series 3 times over while I've been waiting. Neeeed the next chapter
this is actually driving me crazy
please bring out ch.14!
such an awesome series
Your stories are truly amazing, such an incredible turn on. Cannot wait for more
This tease will last a while... Fantastico
150,264 words of magnificent erotic tale. Have had hours of fun with my girl reading this while playing with each other. Thanks
I check out the site every few days just to see if Jack has written Ch. 14... Simply can't wait. This series is the best thing ever on Literotica.
Oh my... This story is unbelievable. I can't wait to the next chapter... Ron is so lucky :) I hope you'll post it soon :P
Thx to share this with us.
The build up is amazing! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
The patience shown by the author is good but mine is running out. Plz post 14
This tale keeps getting better and better. It has given my wife and I untold hours of pleasure!!!
What an incredible story- I'm always checking in for updates as well. Keep up the great work, Jack.
The only story I check for updates on. Brilliant. I want more more more.
That was perfection. I hope that bitch Beth gets her "cum-uppance" soon. constantly interrupting Ron's fun time the way she has.
Eagerly awaiting the continuation.
Once again an absolutely amazing story <3 Post the next one as soon as you can! I really want to find out how his adventures end ;)
...series! Never read any erotic literature as amazing as what you put here. I hope, somebody makes a movie (or a trilogie) out of that: Could be the best porn movie ever!
Thanks Jack for another fantastic chapter.
This story is the first one I check for an update every single time I go on this site. It's just incredibly well described, time seems to slow down exactly the same way it does for Ron ;-)
Looking forward to the next chapters!
It's really too much. He must go crazy after that
Great job as usual, jack.
Hoe about a sequel to the Trick or treat story?
Another wonderful chapter. Thanks for continuing to add onto the story, please keep it going. I eagerly await more chapters. Best series on the site, hands down.
This is one of the most perfectly erotic stories on this site - I'm so glad you took it back up again. Thanks so much, and PLEASE keep up the good work!
Amazing story!
I hope to see his orgasm's get denied for longer and longer. :)
Thanks for writing more. Love the series. Keep up the great work.
Who else could sustain such an erotic scenario across 7 pages...and a gratifyingly crushing let down to keep us hungry for the next encounter! I hope your real life leaves a little space for writing - give the maestro room to work everybody! Thanks as ever.
Thanks for continuing,I think you have a real following that cant wait to see what happens next