All Comments on 'A Triangle of Angel, Demon, Human'

Fairly good story but you got your pepole mix up there a time or two get a editer to look at your work keep up the story

A twist for sure,and somewhat confusing at the start as i think you got the names mixed up,,,need an editor for sure,,,a good first try,,,practice makes perfect,good luck

The beginning was very confusing. First, Shiro is waiting for Laura, and then, all of a sudden Laura is there having a conversation with Draco. And THEN, all of a sudden a man that was sent by LAURA shows up to pick up Shiro. Isn't Laura already there? CONFUSING INDEED!

I apologize for the name mishap. I had not noticed it while i was editing it and didnt catch it until someone told me about it. T_T i will try to correct this and make sure that it doesnt happen in the sequel. ^_^ thank you all for your feedback