All Comments on 'A Trip to London Pt. 01'

by Nightwing88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Incredibly hot, looking forward to part 2!

MafenMafenabout 1 year ago

Where is this London pub where you pay in US dollars and leave tips?

I doubt very much you've even been to London or you were one of the many dickheads who do go and miss the whole point.

Your story is littered with so many mistake! Spelling, grammar, plot. Get an editor. Or a life.

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I used to write all the time, left for a few years and now I'm back. I'm interested in writing long term narratives, fan fic and some pure smut.