All Comments on 'A True Alpha Ch. 01'

Wasn't crazy about the ending; major low blow to the man she "loves," but that's part of the terrain. Hopefully there IS more to come, and it all works out. Nice touch making Raj a gentleman.

You picked what is quite possibly the most beta ethnicity of all, to play a bull, lol.

@Anonymous Really?? I don't remember making the bull white. Wait for the rest of the story. I'm not writing a bull themed story and tried my best in chapter 1 to not make it look like one. If it seemed like one to you, I guess you are a beta cuck

I would either kick them BOTH out of the house or I would pack ALL my shit and move on. This is true in real life you do NOT marry or have a relationship with a cheap slut

love the IMWF, wished the Indian was more dominate

If Raj is really a nice guy, he won't stay the weekend with her. He'll recognize her as a selfish bitch that mistreats her husband and run for the nearest exit. I guess we'll see.

This was horrible, just horrible, and I'm being nice. 15 minutes of my life wasted on reading this trash, could you have had a bigger hard on for the Indian character? No you'd be limp as a noodle if your reading this swill. Don't quit your day job, that is unless your day job is writing erotica, then by all means, please quit immediately.

Your stories are great...especially those which give happy ending..e.g Friends with benefit/love and greek priestess etc..keep it up

Wow this was incredible! Great story and loved the intensity between Raj and Denise. Raj being a nice guy but a freak under the sheets making Denise lust after him is a neat touch too. We gotta have sequels of this, with perhaps more women falling for Raj too!