All Comments on 'A Turn Ch. 02 - The Morning After'

I get this is fantasy; but this was so insanely unrealistic that I half expected the entire Avengers team to assemble and duke it out with Bugs Bunny and the rest of the Loony Tunes cast.

Actually, that might have been more believable and a hell of a lot more interesting.

You should write that story because unless you enjoy hurting children and women, this was just dumb.

Should I take a swing at realism, I'll seek you out for feedback. In the mean time, please continue to expect the rest of the world to cater to your preferences, for nothing in return.

I look forward to reading your first story.