All Comments on 'A.V.A - Advanced Voice Assistant Ch. 02'

Awesome job. Can’t wait to see more

With the character you've developed, you just ruined what was a promising story - why make him such a sadistic moron ? Daddy indeed !!

I must say I agree with Anon here, little bit too much on the sadistic side. Adding the MC element to it makes for a very unlikable chap.

Fuck what the others said. It's fiction. Anything in the mind control category is going to involve some questionable ethics. I love this story. Please don't make u wait a year to read the next part.

Fascinating

Well, that’s one way to ruin what promised to be a good story….

It's your story, please write it how you'd like to. I keep coming back hoping for a new chapter to read.