All Comments on 'A Very Srange Pair for the Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the premise. The writing itself was subpar. I would have liked to have seen them both addicted to what nature intended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

And then?

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

Nice one! Bodies are bodies after all. Anuses are the same, a penis and a clit are not that different, but a man has nothing that corresponds to a vagina, but they are designed to fit together.

But is the whole person that we want as a life partner.

p_white98p_white98about 1 year ago

Please write a sequel. A few years later. Lots of memories and the same tenderness.

Well done.

NipkorNipkor10 months ago

How interesting is that as a story line , bet it happens too . Very nice .

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...