All Comments on 'A Viper's Nest Ch. 03'

Masterfully done wordsmith we will follow your progress with great interest.

Really enjoyed this so far keep them coming. 5/5

Please keep these coming. Just wonderful!

Enjoying this greatly.

Would love to read more.

Thanks.

Excellent writing and I cannot wait to read more.

Thanks to all of you for your comments.

As someone who is not used to praise, these comments do mean a lot to me.

I do of course welcome all forms of comments :)

Incredible detail, interesting characters, and a bias for this sort of stuff has me hooked. Well done!

Thanks.

Chapter 4 will be up within the next few days, just waiting on the Mods to allow it (had to make a minor change).

Amazing!

Thanks

Thanks to PrivatePerv and the two Anonymous replies next to them.

Aw, should you make the girl have never had sex with a Guy before?

@Anonymous - She's had sex before, with males and females, however, due to her shift pattern, she's been on a dry spell for a long time.

So John’s treatment has altered him to be able to live among the vipers. Does that change any off his human cravings? Obviously he can ingest and process their food paste, but will he crave a steak and potato after some time?

It appears that the forces involved in Vortex travel overwhelm the human brain to the point of passing out, unless it’s for some other reason. It will be interesting to see what other things that vipers take for granted that will affect John and no what those affects might be

It also appears that the medical treatment has altered John’s reproductive system. Increased cum production, sensitivity(?), erection… I think I see the need for periodic relief happening. But one thing I am glad to see was the physicality mismatch between human and viper. She has to have a much larger mass than him, I can easily see her being able to break him if she’s not careful.

One thing that hasn’t been addressed or made an issue, is that John is for all intents and purposes the lager human left. What kind of psychological affect must that have, knowing that you can never see home again? The vipers obviously know more of human history than John does simply because they have been watching it and he’s been in stasis. I think I read in a previous chapter about a worldwide war. Are they referring to something that happened after John left earth? I’m surprised that John has not asked about more information on how he came to be there from the captain. Or been more inquiring about, we’ll, everything. Actually he wasn’t really freaked out when he got his first look at a viper. Does that mean there was some sort of brain manipulation, damage from the uncontrollable vortex jumping, or something else?

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Anyway, thank you for your work and sharing this story. I’m off to read the next chapter

Enjoying the story. Single concern - intimacy development. Things went too quickly from "we're only going to cuddle" to "let me lick your balls". Usually, humans don't let strangers lick their balls.

@JAFCritic

For now, ignore the unexpected changes to John’s reproductive system. In discussion with a reader elsewhere plus my own thoughts on it, Chapters 1-8 will get rewritten (mostly minor things, some major). While I’ll still be writing a erotic story, I feel I need to tone it down a bit.

John was in stasis before his ship, the Poseidon, ended up entering the Vortex. You’ll note that John does seem to get angry about his current situation, however, he was specifically chosen for the mission he was on because he has the mental faculties to survive a long journey on his own, or even encountering aliens.

@Dry_opinion

Especially if they are a 8ft tall curvy Viper woman with breasts that could probably crush your skull :P

Don’t worry about any issues you find in chapter 1-8, I’ll be doing a minor or major edit/rewrite once the story is complete.