by CinderellaD
Incredible. I'm terribly picky when it comes to these things, but you did a marvelous job!
:: slow clap :: I sincerely hope that this is similar to somebody's story, because very few people get to have a first experience that good. Amazingly written, HMU if you want somebody to go over your next one before publishing.
Fantastic story that was told in fabulous detail. It seemed to such a lovely way for a girl to lose her virginity, even if a little unconventional!! I was happy that it all worked so beautifully for Sally, but I am intrigued to know what h as opened next for the three of them? Was it s one off, never to be repeated encounter, or the start of an ongoing ménage a trois?? I’m not asking for a follow up per se, but would like to know the outcome.
Well done and full marks from me!
Once again, so we'll written, complex, sensual, and personal. I loved the way you developed the characters. Sally was so endearing and I just wanted her to have the experience she deserved and of course she got so much more.