All Comments on 'A Virtual Temptress Ch. 18'

Very sweet. Amusing. Sightly cheesier then it needed to be, not quite enough d/s roleplay to be smoking smoking hot, but still arousingly hot. And this chapter exists! We are all very glad you are back to writing, and look forward to moar pls.

(If you do a bit of editing, change `sinful' in 'as his body was claimed by warm, sinful lust.' to something else --- there has been no indication lust is sinful, just existentially dangerous given the partner.

Also --- this is the first PiV intercourse between the two --- if you do rewrite, a bit more teasing / power play. If intercourse is not particularly significant, why have all the other encounters(bar one a few chapters ago) refrained from it. We presume it is an additional intimacy, that she would previously enslave or consume her victims without needing to even grant them much of her self or attention; that it is a significant intimacy..)

Your writing remains lovely, in all its incidental details. And it is hard not to grin at the idea of a succubus cosplaying a succubus.

Wooooooooo! Feeling very spoiled. Love having another chapter so soon. Thank you so much for writing!

So so so so so so good! I love this story!

Love the chapter! Though I think it could've used some more teasing / dominance which Lexi's original plan seemed to be heading towards.

Dang. I want Lexi to tell me I'm a good boy.

MOAR!!! We want moar!

Dear @QuietElegance,

You've described a fantasy I've had since childhood but didn't recognise as such. I'm a little shaken and very grateful for your help in understanding myself a little better.

Great to see another chapter. Been awhile since I've checked the site. So in love with this story.

More pwease?

This is definitely one of if top favorite series on the site. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Love it when she says "good boy".

so this is becoming a love story?

i wonder if any other succubi are going to arrive?

Mas, por favor!

Any more coming on this pls?

I'm totally hooked on this series. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I just shotgunned this whole series. I'm desperate for more Lexi. Any projection on the next chapter release?

So so good.

Moar! MOAR!!!!

Pls finish this story, I’ve been hanging on it for years! :)

I would say it was fantastic as chapter which was perhaps last but I really wished it wasn't last 😭

This series was perhaps best out of succubi, games and mind control genre with added late touch of romance made this series simply perfect with so many ups and downs and variations rather than monotonous one-sided surrender or sex. Even side charcters fun time involving imps was executed nicely 🥰 and short enough not to annoy readers