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LdyHoneybeeLdyHoneybeealmost 2 years agoAuthor

https://literotica.com/s/a-walk-in-paradise-garden-ch-04

astushkinastushkinalmost 2 years ago

A wonderful first story. I enjoyed your attention to language and the dream like quality it created. This phrase jumped out at me as particularly evocative and sensual: "...her bare feet softly drumming the ground in fruitless protest..."

LdyHoneybeeLdyHoneybeealmost 2 years agoAuthor

How very kind of you to say, Astushkin! Thank you for the comment and for the compliment!

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If Shakespeare had written just about himself, he would have been the most disturbed individual in literary history.