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All Comments on 'A Wet And Hard Night'

by Anonymousgirl19

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SirlancelotshackleSirlancelotshacklealmost 11 years ago
Lucky guy! And gal!

Nice story, makes me want to start internet dating! Anyway, I enjoyed ready it and it seemed to have the right effect! Now I goto take a cold shower... Or maybe .....

memorable_eventmemorable_eventalmost 11 years ago
A very good story

For your first story here, it's very good. Keep on writing.

TooCleverByHalfTooCleverByHalfalmost 11 years ago
A Promising First Story

You have a good storytelling voice and a knack for showing the right details to engage the reader. It makes me want to savor the story. I'd recommend drawing out the story progression more. But all in all, a good, solid story.

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepalmost 11 years ago
Pretty good

Keep it up.

Anonymousgirl19Anonymousgirl19almost 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for the comments and feedback, I appreciate it all!

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