by PrimalRoots
I was confused at the start of this chapter since it seemed like a different story but after rereading it, I realized that it actually made the story better for me. Seeing how Hearin was so into it after the way that Billie described her was part of what threw me off so much. I have to applaud you on a really original concept and you seem to be pulling it off incredibly well. I look forward to seeing if that continues since the characters and time limits mentioned be Emma appear to possibly give you too many options but I can’t wait to find out. Thanks again for the story.
J.D.
I liked this a lot. Especially the two girls sort of feeding off one another. Thank you for the tale. Looking forward to the rest.
Hot story, well written. Please continue exploring the characters' development.