All Comments on 'A Wolf's Mate'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

It's a great and sexy story from a female perspective. What do you guys think? More please. Follow that biker. I want to hear him speak. Amongst other things

FadedIndianFadedIndian12 months ago

Decent plot line. Need to find a proof reader, the incorrect pronouns and words that made it past spell check but were incorrect for intent mayhave turned some readers off before completing.Keep writing.

EmmesLust794EmmesLust79412 months ago

It started off promising then it started moving too fast. More time could have been spent emphasizing the connection between the lead character and the alpha before the sex. For all the reader knows, he’s another domineering asshole just like the first guy. It would have been nice to know him better. Additionally, a little more proofing would have been good too.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Please write more, your story has so many directions it could go and I know for myself I would like to read more of them.

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