All Comments on 'Abandoned Rage'

How did a audit turn up money spent for drugs and hookers since those are paid for me in cash ? Sorry a audit of company books would not show that unless it was dinners at strip clubs for clients. Get your facts straight before you write about it and make an ass of yourself as so many writers on here and even in Amazon books are guilty of. Its a not so new concept of doing research before you write about something you have no clue about. Also I have to say majority of you male characters ate weak betas. A guy dancing with my wife grabbing her ass is definitely getting punched in the face. The same guy tells me he is stealing my wife and been screwing her for months isn't walking out of the place intact. Your characters need to man up.

This is the third time reading this. As I've said before, you're the best. 'Double or Nothing" is one of my all-time faves. I just wish your stories didn't take so long to read. Like we say in America, 'your SHIT don't stink'. 5 stars, cause it's honest, and the asshole didn't get his clock cleaned. But that just makes Greg a better man than I. The Bear definitely approves. Mrs. Bear thinks the bitch deserved more. Like sold to slavery. Just her opinion. Loved it. Keep writing.

The BEAR

Another great read - really love the local phrasing - "batting a 100"

Ican only hope your scene with Rebecca dying is true. I just lost my Love of 45 years, and am wondering now more than ever about AFTER! Thank you, Mike

Such a wonderful story! Starts out heartbreaking and finishes super heartwarming.

Jeez. I hate you for making me cry. Thanks

re Anonym- ass of May 2023. The very fact that they're converting company funds to cash is an automatic red flag to any auditor. A search of your home or vehicle which turns up a 'large' amount of cash is automatically subject to seizure under Forfeiture Laws- to the IRS as unreported income or any law enforcement as past/future drug sales. Escort services take cards, ditto strip clubs. This is Literotica: if I wanted a lesson in forensic accounting, I'd go to another site. When Other referred to Colleen as Collen in consecutive sentences, I didn't go ape shit. I just thought it needed an extra set of eyeballs prior to publishing. Attention to detail is a good thing but it can occasionally interfere with storytelling. What brand whip cream does he spray into Rebecca's mouth and how did he avoid jamming a choking wad of the stuff into her trachea when his cock joined the party? Eight pages of story and so few errors, whereas you bucko, have typos in both of your first two sentences. Other isn't responsible for the mistakes you find in stories not his own.

Anytime I find this trolling-type comment, I check the account page to see what he's written himself (often nothing) or favorites page (full of categories I skip). Don't like the free stories? Demand a refund- or better, demonstrate your eloquence by writing your own story under your own nom de plume. oh.BTW 5 stars

Anon56

re LT56Linebacker: the reaction of Mrs Bear (or any momma bear) shouldn't surprise you by now. Don't let their soft eyes, warm lips and gentle curves fool you. Women are vicious! Ain'tcha ever seen field hockey?? Read your Librarian story recently- it would'a read smoother if MC was in first person. The 'he said' and 'he replied' got a bit confusing. I agree about "Double or Nothing" as being another great Aussie read. The very ending left me 'wut?' and the alternate ending was 'WTF??' until I read that authors Justice series. Another BTB story with MC as an auditor is 'Good for the Goose'. five stars for both of them, too

Anon56

Correction- Its 'Good Enough for the Goose.'

Anon56

That was 5 star + writing. Poignant and painful to read when it came to her passing. Just brilliantly put together.

Mr. Other, this is excellent. I, too, cried while reading Rebecca's dying scene. She was such an interesting character. At the time I read it, I really wanted Greg to punch Troy's lights out, but I would have hated for him to spend time in jail, and him punching the walls perhaps was enough. Well crafted. Very enjoyable.

beautiful! each time i read this,it gets better :)

You had me balling damn you.not many have been able to do that.One of the most talented authors I’ve ever read.your stories are magnificent

Beautiful story

I wish you hadn't linked the stupid and impossible June story. But your story is pretty good!

Ah ..... where did the author get their theology from? You shouldn't bring the only living God (the God of Abraham) into a story if you do not know Him. I am not judging you, no just offering some info

A great story and a good length with plenty to get your teeth into. Loved the way he was so outraged at Jillian's infidelity and the attitude of so called friends, as well as getting his revenge / justice. Troy deserved what he got as, in many ways, did Jillian. Loved the new romance and its telling but thought that it would take longer for him to come round, and, as for bawling, I was emotional at their passing too. Well written and carried one alon, just surprised it's taken so long to come across it. You're in my favourites now. 5⛤

cada vez que vuelvo por aquí, descubro cosas que no había notado antes.

gracias de nuevo autor!

Mate it was a brilliant story, however I must say the cultural colonialism is coming through very strongly. No self respecting Aussie, Kiwi or Brit would lower themselves to refer to someone as an asshole. They would've call him an Arsehole or a useless cunt. Never an asshole.

Also a true Aussie or Kiwi wouldn't be seen dead in a mustang. It's another story if it were an XR8 Coon. Mustangs are for those poofter faggot townies with tiny dicks 😉

RE: A guy dancing with my wife grabbing her ass is definitely getting punched in the face. The same guy tells me he is stealing my wife and been screwing her for months isn't walking out of the place intact. Your characters need to man up.

It would appear that someone has chosen to ignore a good deal of the character build up prior to making an asinine comment. The author has pointed out the MC is a thoughtful individual, giving thoughtful consideration prior to taking action.

1. Greg could have attacked Troy possibly inflicting some damage, but at what cost.?

2. A sizeable number of Troy's friends were close enough that the number of blows he would likely be able to land were limited.

3. The amount of punishment he would be forced to endure would be significant. Punches, slaps, kicks, etc. over a longer period of time than his "contribution".

4. As the instigator, it's likely he'd be invited to spend time in the hospital and later the jail.

5. This would have provided his "ex-wife to be" and "used butt wipe" time to move into his home and begin manipulating funds and assets.

While rearranging Troy's face may have provide a brief moment of satisfaction, the costs were too high. Such action might have also had a negative impact on his business.

Well, this is one of the most brilliant stories I have had the pleasure to read. I loved the entire story and especially the ending with Rebecca and Greg finding each other again. Too bad there are only 5 stars to give as it would have scored a lot higher. I was barely holding it together at the end and there are very few stories that can do that.

Wonderful story. Great writing! Thank you.

G

Wow, what a powerful and unexpected story. Thank you

Very well done, thank you.

It's hard to reconcile the actions of someone that claims to be a nice person and yet they then knowingly try to take their SO for everything they've got. In some of your other works you've had characters that have behaved appallingly, but at least they were motivated by poor information and driven by immature, kneejerk reactions (talking about daughters and sisters etc., here). I also have little to no problem accepting that someone can be persuaded into betraying their spouse for a returned first love, or a conniving seducer and still think of themselves as a good person and otherwise behave as one. I don't even have a problem that they may consider their act of betrayal justified and actually think of themselves as the victim ... but it's a much bigger step to then try and takeaway everything the man owns and destroy them. Such behaviour doesn't just appear as if a temporary aberration, that behaviour is something that's indelibly marked throughout the core of the person like the lettering through a stick of Blackpool rock.

I just don't think that such people are nice, they may think of themselves as being nice but their everyday actions and behaviours give themselves away, and it's difficult for genuinely nice people to not recognise the unpleasant sides of such people.

I guess what I'm saying is that I just don't buy the miraculous switch from dutiful angelic wife to evil devil that all too often surprises the poor unknowing but otherwise perfect husband. The upshot here is that I think the cheating spouse needs to be a little more rounded, fleshed out and not seem like someone suffering from a psychotic break ... or if so, that it's made more clear why and how.

My favorite part of this story is when after Rebecca does he still won't have anything to do with Jillian, because he loves his wife too much. He is just waiting to be reunited with his great love.

Another reread. I enjoy this story more each time I read it. I think I might be a closet Australian.

Great story, well written. You know when a tear is shed for a character passing, you’ve become very vested.

Some parts of this story are really good. But some parts are really too good to be true. The other guy having a woman and kid somewhere else, being a financial fraud, Mark being a hoojer lover, Becca being so impressed with husband and becoming his slut. These parts could have been toned down.

One of the perfect stories.

WOW - BEST EVER---I want to do a 10, but can't -- so I'm doing two5's

Thanks for the hours of pure and wonderful entertainment. The became real.

Sad stories always make me cry. It's actually a love story and a glimpse into the afterlife.

I loved this story one of my favorites

WOW. That was a very, very compelling and great read. I really shed alot of tears when reading the both of their passing. Your writing has a knack of holding your readers attention. Well done. Looking forward to reading more from you.

I almost cried too when I heard how Becca passed, and then the author, but I really hope that there's a slice of paradise when you die. This is how I want to live and die if possible. I would like to live forever, but I'm old enough to know that we all die at some point — so I hope that this tale will inspire me to live with love and spread it.

This became my top 10. Thank you for a lovely story!

This was a great story. A real tear jerker. Thanks to the author, for not allowing Jillian back in his life, at the end. I remember being told once, that society can take away everything from you, but your good name. That is yours, to give away, or keep sacred. Greg did himself proud.

5 stars.

I'm afraid the "reunited after death" thing just doesn't do it for me. The actual story was interesting, but far too drawn out. I had to come back several times, and quite honestly, I never did get to the end.

For me, this is the kind of thing a woman would enjoy writing.

GREAT story! Thank you , John Other. Five stars ⭐️ for this one.

Hi, I have read this story a couple of times now. yes I still love it each time. Not only is there a sadness to it, There is a truth to it as well, every relationship should be based on truth, Loyalty, Integrity. I believe it takes being honest with your self, first, before trying to build a relationship with someone else. Hopefully the one you find and love, can and will be honest with them selves as well as you too.

I liked it a lot

Rereading for the fifth or sixth time. Still fantastic. Bravo!

At the age of 80 and married for 56 years I can only hope that his ending could be true.

Best Story Ever...

That reminds me of another couple. The husband was on his death bed. His wife told him she loved him and he said to her, 'And I love you. But if you even look at another man I swear I'll turn over in my grave." She reassured him and later that night he passed on. Well, 20 years went by and then she died, too. St. Peter met her and checked her in. He told her that Michael, Jr. would show her around heaven and he asked her what she would like to see first. She said, 'Well, I would like to see my husband.' St. Peter looked over at another angel and said, 'Hey Michael, go tell old Spinning Charlie his wife is here.' True story. PS I agree with macian49.

She was married six times? Excessive attempt to show she was unhappy her whole life. Enter option was having her never marry again.

I'm going to say THANK YOU to the author. I've not been around Literotica long.... However, I've read a fair number of stories in that time. I'm going to say that this is the absolute best story I've read here. Bar none! The good stories pull me in emotionally. In life, I'm one of those people who always put myself in other peoples shoes. I think it's a great way to understand how a person might feel - given their individual circumstances. This story - hit all the buttons. The joy that Greg felt being Jillian's husband. The rage and betrayal Greg felt. The satisfaction of Greg preparing for future contingencies with the pre-nup. The profound shock Greg felt at having his world ripped from him. The indescribable betrayal Greg felt towards people who he thought were his friends.

The love and support he felt from those who stood by his side. The absolute complete trust and all-consuming love Rebecca had for Greg - and Greg for Rebecca. And the immense heart tugging sadness of Rebecca's last days and the hole it left in Greg's life. (I won't lie... it got really dusty in here when she was dying and passed.) It takes a special writer to strike all of these notes - to make them believable - and to get them to pull at your heart strings. Job well done! I'm giving this tome 5 Stars. If I could give it more - I would. If it's not already there - the is definitely HOF worthy. Other2Other1.... Thank you again. Bravo!

is there sex in heaven COME AND FIND OUT that was a fun ride

Second time read and is still a good read 5

Certainly not my usual type of story, but so well written and very intense emotionally.

I’m exhausted!! Best compliment a writer can get

I loved this story. Thank you!!

What an incredibly intense slow burn piece of art this story was!! So very well written. Cheered for the hapless hero throughout to exact his well deserved vengeance against those who humiliated he so ... Sad ending brought me to many years. This deserves so much more than 5 stars!!!

Fantastic and very nice story!!!

Congratulations!

I LOVE it! This is the third time I've read it and it's better each time. And I've cried at the end each time. Thank you for a great story!

Dude, you made me cry.

Fabulous story written by a great writer.

Very good story by a very good writer. But… when it came down to the clif notes at the end, one very important note was omitted. Like, how did she get herself gagged, blindfolded, with all four limbs tied down to the bed? All by herself?

Inquiring minds really want to know that. At least this one does.

Five stars, even with the mystery.

Thanks for the comments as to the mystery of how she got herself tied up. When I wrote it, I saw that Rebecca got her feet secured, then lined up bindings (cuffs), getting her right hand into place, and lastly, her left hand through that system where you push your hand into the cuff and it snaps shut, thereby securing her in place with no assistance from anyone. At least I can see how she did it in my head...

My only critique of you is that you dont write enough stories.

I just plowed through a 27K word long story and read the whole thing.

Easy 5

*****

I really liked your story but as writers can we all get past men getting drunk and hurting themselves and innocent objects, after learning about wifey's cheating...

An excellent, well-told tale!!! Thank you for a great tale!! Oh. Yup, jillian got what she desrved!

Dear John, thank you very much. One of the best stories here. Keep on writing, please. Your readers and followers love you!

Captain Obvious alert! I'm a nitpicker. Many find my nitpicks obvious at best, annoying at worst. If that bothers you, please just go onto the next comment, because I won't be changing in this lifetime.

BTW, if you want to send me feedback about my comments, you might want to tell me which story so that I can look at it. I might even agree with you! I AM capable of learning, or maybe I was just having a bad day, Also, it’s hard to take you seriously when you send it anonymously.

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He should take all the money, let her fiht him for it, the same with the house.

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"Now in hindsight, I am sure that Jillian agreed so easily because she knew, someday she would likely betray me for her lover." - That makes no sense. If she knew she was going to betray him, why sign a prenup that protects him.

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Why the fuck is he destroying his own property?

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If they had such a "true love," why did they break up before school was even over?

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"using the money to pay for a number of less than desirable services from drugs and hookers to what amounted to sending money to a mistress and child over in the United States." - I don't think that the company records would show what the money was uses for.

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fiancé has 2 e's when referring to the woman. I ignored the first time, thought it might have been a typo, but it happened again. And it's not capitalized.

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"delicious man juice?" - ROFL1

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"make you scream in extract" - "in extract?" I think you meant "in ecstasy."

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I don't know how Jillian thought they could be friends. MAYBE if their marriage had been built on honesty, but it wasn't.

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I'm glad he didn't take Jillian back.

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"my kids told stories of Rebecca and I growing up" - How would the kids know stories of Greg and Rebecca growing up?

Wonderful story, proves no one can be inside a story like the author.

I think the best stories begin as a quick outline then take on their own life. Great story

I found the end a bit tedious. But I'm not very partial to tear-jerkers. And I was rather shocked to see that an Aussie doesn't do better with his grammar. For goodness' sake, please learn how to use the conditional. Or just ask someone to read through before you publish your final effort.

Multiple readings. I always cry when Rebecca dies. This is just one hell of a fine effort and I thank you.

Think this is the 3rd or 4th time of reading and it's still one of the very best. Makes me laugh and rage and cry. Thank you for this epic tale. BardnotBard

Other2other is a pretty good author, but he can get a bit predictable and tedious at times. But like another Anon, I'm not usually a great fan of tear-jerkers. BUT, if that is what you want, then this author is one of the better ones. So, what-ever my reservations, well done.

Simply put, loved it.

Oh god. How can any woman ever live up to the standard that rebecca has set. Her passing was so overwhelming and so sudden.

Wow. Just finished reading this for the second time. The death scenes made me choke up and tear up yet again. Thanks so much for finishing the story started in June Sucks. That story desperately needed an ending, and you really brought it home. 5* yet again.

"I felt the adrenaline of being... abandoned by my wife that I had to sit down." Really? If anything, adrenaline make you want to stand & do something; in this case, smash the fuckers something severely. Never knew by what happened he's feel adrenaline. "I opened my bank & ..." C'mon, opened his bank account(s). Didn't read what was written?

"Do you hate me that much?" One of my fav parts, after Jillian's obnoxious & sickening telling her husband she's leaving him for his true love. "No," he'd say, "Hate's not a strong enough word. You cry on my shoulder after the asshole abandons you, I help bring you & your strength back. And you thank me by not really loving me but him from afar? The moment he returns, you fuck him behind my back then arrange so nicely for me to be totally humiliated & disrespected by you? And yes, you abandoned me like he abandoned you, but he's your true love? You get me sick!"

A few other mistakes noted, but as the commenter under me wrote, "the death scenes make me choke up and tear up again." Like that person, it was also my 2nd time reading this, that part taking me 2 days, remembering my wife. The writing throughout had me feeling Greg's range of emotions.

Despite Mr. Other writing Rebecca asking Jillian, "did he ever make you scream in extract..." instead of ecstasy, I love this author's works & his ability to tell the story. Also, like that person, I give this story another 5 stars. Thank you, Mr. Other, for such an outstanding piece of work. Bob

Very little I would change here. Well done!

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Captain Obvious alert! I'm a nitpicker. Many find my nitpicks obvious at best, annoying at worst. -

most aren't even a nitpick but more just what you want, how you would have written the story.

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He should take all the money, let her fiht him for it, the same with the house. -

The house was not in question, it was protected by the prenup. And you knew this as you said in the next nitpick.

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"Now in hindsight, I am sure that Jillian agreed so easily because she knew, someday she would likely betray me for her lover." - That makes no sense. If she knew she was going to betray him, why sign a prenup that protects him. -

Of course it makes sense, if she didn't sign, she couldn't have her cake and eat it too!

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Why the fuck is he destroying his own property? -

Better than going to jail for beating the lovers.

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If they had such a "true love," why did they break up before school was even over? She was hurt and pissed off why would she want to.

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"using the money to pay for a number of less than desirable services from drugs and hookers to what amounted to sending money to a mistress and child over in the United States." - I don't think that the company records would show what the money was uses for.-

You may think that but YOU don't KNOW.

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fiancé has 2 e's when referring to the woman. I ignored the first time, thought it might have been a typo, but it happened again. And it's not capitalized.

Only legit nitpick.

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"delicious man juice?" - ROFL1 -

Ya I know what you mean, it's how I feel at some of the comments.

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"make you scream in extract" - "in extract?" I think you meant "in ecstasy."-

It could be extract, as in pulling out a little too soon for her to orgasm.

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I don't know how Jillian thought they could be friends. MAYBE if their marriage had been built on honesty, but it wasn't.-

Yep and everyone knows that, even before you comment.

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I'm glad he didn't take Jillian back. -

Who cares!

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"my kids told stories of Rebecca and I growing up" - How would the kids know stories of Greg and Rebecca growing up. -

The kids were the ones doing the growing up.

I loved the story up until you had Becca dying Probably because I lost the love of my life to cancer

Yes.your ending bought tears to these old eyes also.you wrote a great story.thank you Sir.

Well crafted mate, good imagination and realistic scenarios. 5*s

Very interesting angle on showing how selfish and brutal people can be - even loved ones. The passing of Rebecca was very emotional and bittersweet. I too shed tears, sharing the same deep loss when immediate family members passed from cancer - one at 18 years of age, another at 37. Bittersweet over the loss, but in substantial peace, having had what most people never achieve - a truly fulfilled, loving, intimately shared life into the sunset years before "death do you part."

Revisiting on nitpicking:

1. "The house was not in question, it was protected by the prenup".

Wholly incorrect. The house was protected by a Trust; a separate and legal entity.

2. "It could be extract, as in pulling out a little too soon for her to orgasm."

That's not extraction - that's simply withdrawal. Extraction implies action by a 3rd party and/or the use of tools in separating attached or cemented pieces. Eg a dentist extracting a tooth.

3. "my kids told stories of Rebecca and I growing up" - The kids were the ones growing up.

If so, then your grammar is atrocious. This is a difficult construct; it requires something like "we listened to stories about Rebecca and myself by my kids when they were just growing up."

One of the best stories I have read in my life. Drama, pain, rage, sorrow, tears, this had it all. Even goths (which I was also one years ago) and the passing of a love one.

This guy can write, I saw the club in my mind, the drop of blood when it hit the floor. I loved how you brought the kiss and the slap together at the right parts of the story to make me have to use a thrid tissue to dry my eyes.

This is the first one of your stories I have read, but I'm going to go and read all of them.

Thanks

Barb

He's estranged from his mother and sister, his wife leaves him for a criminal, his friends drop him like a hot potato. Maybe Greg is just an unlikable character...

Good story, but just a follow-up to

Your after notes . Troy could not be “deported to the U.S.” he was an Australian citizen, and therefore not subject to deportation- extradition perhaps, but not deporyation.

I am a Man of honor When My son was born it was hard on My wife C section My son was 3 weeks late and he came out pissing and craping all the way out the Stupid doctor did not put in a Drain Tube so when I too her to get the staples out i thought she was being a Big Baby with her screaming when She came out the Doctor had to open Her Back to the womb because She abacist We had always talked about 2 maybe 3 kids But after what happened She took it Her own mind She was not having any more kids and She did that without telling Me anything First she put on over 250Lbs and with how she healed from being opened back up She had a fat roll that Covered the Love canal up in front and with her the only way she would have sex was Missionary and then she started into the volunteer stage Where she was in everything you could think Hospital Chaplain Calling Bingo at a Homeless shelter and many other church related Volunteer job till there was No time left for me. By the time I got Home from work within a half hour she was gone to some type of meeting or she was just after dinner was eaten was out on the couch in Her Place she sat leaving Me in a King size bed alone. Some times i never even got a Kiss for over a year or even just a Hug . But yet Had to say I love you every time I left the House or went to work. In Her last 8 or so months I do not know how But she knew her Hour glass of time was running out of sand of Life She started to change I was actually get a few kisses and hugs If I saw something on the EnterNet and said it looked cool poof a week or so later it would arrive. She Told me this year we are going to Vegas for your and Our son Daniels Birthday She would Normally take about $250 in cash for emergency Money this time She took $3,000 We went over on the the 9th of October a Friday Sunday morning I woke up at around 4 am She was not in bed I looked around she was setting on a stool and the rooms Breakfast bar and she was Pale white and breathing hard i asked her what wrong ? She said sorry babe I don't feel good I saw she was in trouble I got our Bags packed into the Car woke My Son up got her in the car and we were off for Bakersfield. ca Thank God there was one Cop on the road I never got under 90 MPH took her into Kaiser urgent care and the Doctor when he checked her Blood oxygen level it was under 40% (This was during COVID)The Doc came out and said She is going to a hospital stat They loaded her up in a Ambulance But she was already going into a Comma which she Never came out of She passed 10/27/21 I never got even say Good bye This story broke MY HEART As I said I am a man of Honor and I never cheated on her or ever will till we meet again at the Gate when She we be waiting to welcome me home

It was a good story took me by surprise honestly as the intro and title didn't make it sound that good I guess I shouldn't take the title at face value lol as I said I liked it the only downside is it ended the reality on a sad note with her dying of cancer

This is a very well written story with a very, very sad, but loving ending. Read it, you will enjoy it.

Bravo. Great, excellent, beautiful, terrific and very captivating. I really and truly love this story. Shoutout to the author, great writing. I think this is one of the best reads on lit or any where else for that matter. As I said before, BRAVO.

Absolutely amazing.

Thanks

This is the 4th time I’ve read this story over as many years. Every time I read it I score it a 5. My ONLY negative comment is a personal one, I prefer 2 or 3 page stories with multiple volumes as it’s easier for me to read and keep my place.

The characters are wonderfully developed and draw you into the joys and heartbreaks of their lives. Thank you. I love this story and your work.

I’d sign in to post this comment, but I still haven’t figured out my password. My username is Bisubhubby11, which gives you some insight to how I think.

This story deserves a few reads. So much rage, anguish and then love made my emotions run the gamut. Well written, though using comma instead of periods would make it an easier read

This is the second time I have read this and it's still as good as the first time I read it what I didn't mention on my comment from reading it before was he is a better person than I would have been and better than most men if I'm to be honest her doing that shit in public would have ended with me in jail cause I would have killed them both and people would have played hell pulling me off them cause there is only so much a man can take and that being done in public that way would have been crossing well over that line

My third reading! PhoenixLore captured all of my feelings and emotions

in the last comment! I absolutely loved it! If only life mirrored these

two ! Again thanks for a page turner that's believable.

Jack

Third damned time I've read this story; third damned time I had to grab a box of tissues. I know the story by now. You'd think I know what it does to me. Oh well. Maybe next time I'll do better.

This is one of the best descriptions of dying and entering the afterlife that I have read. The gentleness and the love brings tears to my eyes every time I read it.

Gotta stop cutting onions while reading erotica... totally a conflict of interest.

Well done.i felt as a unseen bystander. Today I hate not and don't wish harm. I felt all kinds of emotions in this . AS I've always stated my opinion love is the greatest girt we can have. Lol dam fine. And I cried in several spot s .thanks.

Well done! Exceptional writing and a great story.

Outstanding! I felt an actual emotional involvement with the characters. Married 52 years now snd would love 52 more and hope for an ending as he and Rebecca had.

This is a great story. I have reread it several times. You know the writing is great when it evokes emotions every time.