All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 05 - Rejection'

Your best chapter in Abby’s journey. The scene with Dan well crafted/written — felt real: her curiosity/desire to explore with her partner, his deflating reaction and what his response does to her both sexually and emotionally. The closing video-driven masturbation intensely erotic. Did not miss the wolf dream/reference in this chapter. Suspect know where this is going but that is not a problem — simply reflects an interest in your writing.