by neo86
Low rated....not real belieavable...too fast in all three sections. But there is potential in the ideas.
Hey, at least I rated it...not many stories are even worth a "1"
Awful and stupid if your going to nab one grab them both at the same time
I look forward to Kate falling under Jemma's spell too...
Man, this is so hot. I'm so glad I found this story. Please write more chapters, more people in committed relationships dominated and seduced.
hey love this subject --- destrying realtionships / sex slaves / a little more background and build up would be good - more teasing scenes. keep it up...