All Comments on 'Abby's Friend Ch. 03'

by neo86

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
possibilities

Low rated....not real belieavable...too fast in all three sections. But there is potential in the ideas.

Hey, at least I rated it...not many stories are even worth a "1"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The Worst of the three

Awful and stupid if your going to nab one grab them both at the same time

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Another slave for Jemma

I look forward to Kate falling under Jemma's spell too...

temptanddestroytemptanddestroyabout 17 years ago
wow

Man, this is so hot. I'm so glad I found this story. Please write more chapters, more people in committed relationships dominated and seduced.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
great scenario -- a littel quick though

hey love this subject --- destrying realtionships / sex slaves / a little more background and build up would be good - more teasing scenes. keep it up...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yummy

Take Me Jemma !

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