by neo86
hey love this subject --- destrying realtionships / sex slaves / a little more background and build up would be good - more teasing scenes. keep it up...
Man, this is so hot. I'm so glad I found this story. Please write more chapters, more people in committed relationships dominated and seduced.
I look forward to Kate falling under Jemma's spell too...
Awful and stupid if your going to nab one grab them both at the same time
Low rated....not real belieavable...too fast in all three sections. But there is potential in the ideas.
Hey, at least I rated it...not many stories are even worth a "1"