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Click hereEventually after much gasping and sweating the tide finally receded, and she was once again safely in the arms of her kidnapper. "God that was good Master," she cooed, leaning up to give him a peck on the cheek.
"I think I love you" she said, hastily, as an afterthought, blushing bright red, even though neither of them could see her in the now dark bedroom.
"I know you do cunt," he said, stroking her hair, "and someday I'll love you too." She melted then, and fell asleep as happy as she had ever been.
Thanks. She transformed a little too quickly but I enjoyed the story. Ignore the weak anonymous comments, you clearly stated what the story tags were. Keep writing.
I love the whole plot .. it is psychologically complex ,scary yet true and I love it
It’s a good story. It’s what you said it would be. You put it in the right category. Ignore the critics. As a fellow writer here, I sometimes get discouraged by a few negative comments from complainers that a story is what you said it would be. The advice I’ve gotten and I say the same to you. Keep on writing and ignore the haters.
Also came 😉 to share my praise!
I Loved this story 💕
The whiney babies weren't reading scriptures before accidently landing here. You keep it up!
The world is full of ignorant, arrogant, tasteless and undereducated people. They run hither and yon declaiming drivel with all the gravity and self-importance of a Puritan preacher. Ignore them and tell your story, your way. I enjoyed this one, and so did a lot of other intelligent people.