by Kiss Me
Makes me want to go to the office now!! Thanks Kiss... keep writing, please!
Kiss ..... you excel yourself! Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive, it draws me in, envelopes me, until I have finished every last word, leaving me with an overwhelming feeling of d?ja v? ...... almost as if I have experienced it myself .....
Delightful...descriptive and charming. A wonderful tale Kiss. Nice one.
Kiss,once again you have excelled yourself proving that erotic literature doesn't need to be smutty to have a great impact.
Loved it,keep it up.Look forward to your next work of art.
You've done it again Kiss, a sensuous and erotic story that flows beautifully. You are my favourite author here, and I can't wait to read your next story. Well done and congratulations.
the afterglow mmmm wow best story ive read here, and that bj wow, how many times have i said wow now ;-)
Once again you've excelled Kiss. Very well written and done without the smut so commonly seen on lit. Another excellent story of seduction that you excell at. I can't wait to read your next addition to a well deserved portfolio.
Your talents astound me. That has to be one of the most erotic, sensuous, romantic stories I have read on this site so far, and believe me, I read a lot of them!!
Congratulations on a fantastic story. ;-)
You do not read anything better than this, Kiss Me First's work is out of this world!
I do hope you are writing MORE for us.
If I could have given you more than 100~~ I would have!!
Simply Devine