All Comments on 'Aces Pt. 05 - Brian and Lisa Ch. 02'

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maddict 6 months ago

Another good chapter.

I can't believe the quiet her in the comments ! So many things to be said, Abby, Lisa and now Beth are just what Brian needs. Bethany kind of got a raw deal, a self inflicted wound. Where is all the security out at the field. Brian you might need so slip-on in the near future.

A very deep, fun, thoughtful story

Anonymous2 months ago

That's not what ideology is. Lisa seems to be badly paraphrasing the concept of a Rhizome. There are already entire schools of pragmatist thought already.

Djmac1031 28 days ago

another great chapter. And Beth was a pleasant surprise.

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