Across a Crowded Room

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"It was a first last night. I bought it for us. I'd never even seen one, except in pictures, before that arrived."

"Well, all I can say is, it was amazing and now I'm looking forward to this evening more than I was."

We kissed and I stroked her, she was wet but I used some lube and found the act of applying it exciting and so it appeared did Nicole. I climbed on top of her and manoeuvred the tip of it towards her. It was awkward and had I not been so excited it would have been comical but I managed to get it inside her. She sighed and relaxed. "Are you okay?" I asked.

"Yes, but a little apprehensive, go slowly."

I started slowly and gently. It was hard to get a rhythm, but eventually, I worked out what I should be doing and felt Nicole responding. "Stop teasing me with that thing and get on with it."

I smiled and as I thrust harder and faster felt her moving her hips towards me. Suddenly it was in all the way and she made a sound that caused me to stop moving.

"Don't stop, don't stop. Fuck me, fuck me please Connie, fuck me."

I did. It felt amazing and the nub that was against me was making me come as well. I came twice but I know that Nicole came over and again, clutching my ass cheeks to stop me from getting away. Eventually, she bucked so hard I fell away from her and the last of my energy had ebbed away. I collapsed beside her.

*****

I was in a haze lying in her arms. My mind was empty or so I thought, but my mouth opened and words came out, "Chloe and Charlie will be here at the end of May. Maybe we can do it then?" I knew that I'd never been so sure of anything.

Nicole stopped nursing on my breast and looked up puzzled. "What?"

"Get married. Nicole Carter, will you marry me?"

Once again, those eyes shone as she nodded, before again taking my nipple between her lips. That was a good enough answer.

The end

Comments and votes are welcome. It was all going to end here, but I want to catch up with Chloe and Charlotte. Be patient.

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Nicole2023Nicole20237 months ago

I had to reread this since the new story…felt sad all over again about Haley and Karen

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai6437 months ago

So Good again!

Can't wait for the next chapter!.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

i love this story but then again i have loved all your stories starting with the milly scott stories and the two charity tales the way you expand the stories is brilliant and i can not wait to read the next installments thank you and keep writing

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnon10 months ago

This is has been prompted by Cupertino's comment on Different Circles. I recently reread all the connected stories starting with Amy and Dee. By my calculations the whole chronicle now stretches over more than eighty years! Sandy you are without doubt the queen of the multi-generational saga.

However, this story implies that some six years have elapsed from Faith meeting Kirstie until when she opens her new studio so that she can live with KIrstie. Different Circles gives the impression that it all happens in a much shorter time.

jakepedjakepedabout 1 year ago

Hi Sandy l am new reader to your pages, they have been very enjoyable well written l read a few today which need other chapters will keep a lookout. Thank you xx Peter

Rapier875Rapier875about 1 year ago

Another great story, just too short.

But then aren't all good stories to short.........

5 Stars from me !

Rapier

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Kind of agree with the brevity of this (and a couple of the recent) stories. Kind of feel like "fillers" on the way to the next "big thing". And given the length of the break you're taking, I'm really hoping to get hit up side the head with the next one.

No pressure though. Life is what it is, even for good writers.

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

Firstly I love the story, I still miss Amy who kicked this series off with Dee, but we love an extended family story as well. If I’m being critical I’d agree with previous comments that mentioned the fast ending, I’d also ask if anyone in your story world has anything other than coffee and toast for breakfast? I know it’s a small thing, but most of us ring the changes here in real life, and while I’m completely in agreement with drinking good coffee in the morning, a change to maybe bagels, or fruit or even a bacon sandwich (brown sauce of course) might be a way of varying the story somewhat, don’t forget you’ve got pro sportswomen within the story that would have influenced their families meal choices…

Please keep writing, many thanks for all you’re posted so far, cheers Ppfzz.

LiebethLiebethalmost 2 years ago

Im totslly hooked…..you cant stop now

alexwatson62alexwatson62about 2 years ago

Hate to say it, but I sorta agree with ca_dave.

Great story, 5 stars (as always with your tales) but felt a bit rushed.

Having said that, still a great read, and as another chapter in possibly the best thought out "generational" type series, a fantastic addition.

Congratulations, and as many have said before me, please keep writing :)

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