All Comments on 'Across the Bridge'

I really enjoyed your story. I hope you write more about Marianne and Keith. Did they ever get to go to the Garden of Eden?

Hopefully tomorrow includes walking down Duval naked or in body paint. Fun story.

I have occasionally dabbled in naturism over the years and introduced my wife to it about 10 years ago. It was so liberating to mingle with unashamed bodies in what was given to us at birth. I must congratulate you on capturing the mood of a first time venture.

story continue.