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by Bazzle

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Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegleralmost 2 years ago

Interesting if not a bit discombobulated. I could see it filmed like Edward Scissorhands. Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Didn't care for the careless disposal of the cigarette butt. Littering and a fire hazard. That distracted it for me.

D_O_LondonerD_O_Londoneralmost 2 years ago

Sharon is the ideal girl but in reality would drive me mad! Great short story

SmokingFapSmokingFap4 months ago

Fabulous story, Baz! Looking forward to reading the rest of them.

AlexBaileyAlexBailey3 months ago

It’s a good picture of a tragedy. Great 750, Bazzle. 👍

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Smoking, drunk and occasional wetting themed author Can be found on both Reddit and Twitter. Yes my stories are not everyone's tastes. Bit strange, not very erotic. Hope you enjoy reading. Please let me know!