by AppleInSquareShape
i climaxed three times while reading this id have done more but my cock was starting to hurt good writing thanks
I actually really like that it didn't have too much build up.. I think it has a good amount of tease, but a little bit more wouldn't hurt. I would definitely read this again.
Very good story, I love it.
It's a good story but I believe that you went into the sex part a bit too early and if you just kept them apart for a bit then it would of been better as the more tease there is the more of an explosion there will be!
Glad you liked it man!
I'd happily help you out with that ;)
Next part is scheduled to come out soon :o
But not sure when
This was very well made and as a big fan of Total Drama I just couldn't resist whipping out my cock and masturbate over what is a fantastically written story!
Well done, when is part 2 coming out?