All Comments on 'Addicted To You Pt. 01'

by AppleInSquareShape

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

No idea what Courtney it is!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great peice!

i climaxed three times while reading this id have done more but my cock was starting to hurt good writing thanks

BlackFire5BlackFire5about 9 years ago
Got me so wet!

I actually really like that it didn't have too much build up.. I think it has a good amount of tease, but a little bit more wouldn't hurt. I would definitely read this again.

Very good story, I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
2/5 - Needs more work

It's a good story but I believe that you went into the sex part a bit too early and if you just kept them apart for a bit then it would of been better as the more tease there is the more of an explosion there will be!

AppleInSquareShapeAppleInSquareShapeabout 9 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous

Glad you liked it man!

I'd happily help you out with that ;)

Next part is scheduled to come out soon :o

But not sure when

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5/5 - Made me want to masturbate Total Drama

This was very well made and as a big fan of Total Drama I just couldn't resist whipping out my cock and masturbate over what is a fantastically written story!

Well done, when is part 2 coming out?

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