All Comments on 'Adelle Ch. 02'

This story is so good and the part about Nosforatu being different from Vampires is excellent!!!! You freaking rock!

Wonderful story,great characters, I really liked the intimacy between Caleb and Adelle, they seem to have a bit of an odd start in their relationship though. I would really like it if thier relationship would continue to advance and grow to the point of them falling in love (and screwing each other's brains out). Also, it would be great if Caleb were to be more athletic...you know, have the desire to better himself for his woman.

Wow, you know that the story should not end here please continue with this story line. The characters are the perfect start, but I only wish to see them continue and expand the total interact of not just the sexual realm but beyond in what the nosferaatu do and how Adelle came about, what she means about the control of the animal vampires, in essense you left quite a few dangling story ends, and left me wanting more. I await the next chapter.

...story!.....Hope you are going to continue on it?

Great but a little short. Has the possibility of becoming a superb series if you choose... Go for it !

Awesome story he is very lucky to have a vampire lover any chance of continuing this I hope so