All Comments on 'Admission Submission Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Too Short. Just a little action and then....nothing! The story just ends and thinking maybe the next chapter will continue? Well, this chapter should have just kept going and ended the night with whatever he was planning on doing with the women. The chapter after this one starts with another blackmail scheme with the next people involved.

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