by SteveWallace
So - we started out with a nice Dave/Crystal romance story, but in 20 chapters we have 30 characters that the mains are having sex with, and they have turned into porn stars. I was kind of afraid this would happen. All good fun but not my kind of thing. This is the point where I stop reading.
At this point, I am stoping reading it because I am so confusing with too many characters have to put it on my brain. But, if you are smart enough, then it is fun to read.
It is getting very confusing, would have been better with less characters and more focus on the interaction between the chapters, particularly more descriptive sex, but I am still enjoying it and will keep reading, I want to see where it goes. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️