All Comments on 'Adult Situations Ch. 81-82'

At some point, you need to consider whether or not a story has pretty much run its course. I think that yours has passed that milestone long ago. Adding new members into Dave Toller's family isn't breathing any new life into it. It's like the trauma surgeon who refuses to give up on his terminal patient. The body is being kept artificially alive by the machines. But it will never function properly on its own ever again. Please just wrap this one up and move on to something else. I was bored to tears reading this.