All Comments on 'Adult Situations Ch. 91-92: End'

by SteveWallace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was a great story. I looked forward to each new chapter and could not wait to read it.

Excellent in every wat

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sad to see it end.

amritaloveramritaloverover 1 year ago

Thanks for the wonderful story. You deserve a break, but please come back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. Feeble ending ,but typical

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please stop writing! You have no skills.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too much sex; not humanly possible.

JoeslostJoeslostover 1 year ago

Great story. Hope you continue sometime.

Nima06112Nima06112over 1 year ago

you write such an amazing stories but i like to read something different from YOU.

Clancy31015Clancy31015over 1 year ago

I hope we see more from the Worthington Universe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Only one negative. Half the story is a repetative list of players as plan or a brash move to up the word count. Either way not cool. Next stort please make one chaPter of. Players list and then refer to that chapte at the end of jnsfallments as needed. Otherwise an interesting story.

TotosRevengeTotosRevenge8 months ago

Quite enjoyable. Was amazed how you kept your characters straight. Have seen authors with just a few characters screw up names, relationships, etc. If you ever did it was such a small error I never caught it. Thanks for such a well-crafted tale.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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