by SteveWallace
This was a great story. I looked forward to each new chapter and could not wait to read it.
Excellent in every wat
Thanks for the wonderful story. You deserve a break, but please come back.
you write such an amazing stories but i like to read something different from YOU.
Only one negative. Half the story is a repetative list of players as plan or a brash move to up the word count. Either way not cool. Next stort please make one chaPter of. Players list and then refer to that chapte at the end of jnsfallments as needed. Otherwise an interesting story.
Quite enjoyable. Was amazed how you kept your characters straight. Have seen authors with just a few characters screw up names, relationships, etc. If you ever did it was such a small error I never caught it. Thanks for such a well-crafted tale.