by VSS0805
Good story, but please get an editor or proofread your story better. The misspellings, missing words and “autocorrected” words made it hard to read in some instances.
Great story.
Looking forward to the next parts. Hope Alice will confess soon and submit to Hannah. Have been waiting fort that since part 1.
Hope we see another chapter soon. would like to dee phone texts/calls especially to Donna giving some commands, like what to wear, or not wear while at home as well as when showing houses. maybe a couple demands on Phil as well would be good. maybe Alice will be going to Hannah's home away from home to watch or even participate always leaving the couple with bruised buns is a must Pappasleaze!
Can't wait for the next installment. Hoping Alice gets involved. Maybe even have Alice be in charge of all 3 of them
story is developing well, more strict discipline for dona and see where Alice fits in, hope you get us a new installment soon. keep developing the sex and training scenes , they are getting better but there is a lot of erotic explanation on how the characters are feeling that can be done.
I love how Hannah has taken control, and her relationship with Donna flits between friendship and domineering. I hope there's another instalment soon.
I liked it all up until Phil started getting spanked, but that’s just a personal taste ... I find it more of a turn on for him to be dominant rather than submissive.
Are these stories inspired by the now deactivated real college cuckcake from tumblr? None of them seem like a replica but some similar themes (eg, laundry, parking take over) to relationship she had with a couple. I actually found your stories by googling her because I miss her wild stories and interesting personality.
Either way thanks for the fun reading :-)