All Comments on 'Adventures with Charlotte Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
excellent

Part 2 of this story is finally here! While the wait has been too long, the result is certainly an excellent continuation from chapter 1. There will hopefully be more chapters to this wonderful story. Five Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is just wonderful! A story that feels real that’s really hot— with well-crafted characters that draw us in, detail that builds, beautiful small touches. You have real talent. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Part 3??

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Turnabout IS fair play.

Great story but was hoping there would be more chapters. The scene seems set to pursue a competition at least if not a three or moresome. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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