All Comments on 'After Hours Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So happy you added another chapter! Love the continuation of the story and can’t want to see what comes next!!

MissedLifeMissedLifeabout 3 years ago

I am really liking this story and can not wait to see how the other brothers are. If I had any suggestions it would be for Adrian to have been more domineering and putting a fear into Stella. For a virgin she is not coming across as frightened as I would think she would be. Nevertheless it is your story and a good one. Would also be interesting to learn how their mother felt when she married into a group of brothers. Whatever we can do to motivate you let us know.....we have three more brothers to learn about! Stella will be one tired lady!

DeathMaidenDeathMaidenalmost 3 years ago

Please don't stop writing!! Can't wait to read the interactions between Stella and the rest of the brothers!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

cant wait for dacre omg. only criticism is i want to read more. I've been following this story for like a year now and im glad you updated please update more

mrs16issuesmrs16issuesover 2 years ago

Just came across your stories and they are incredible! Please please continue this story!!!

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