by theyRule
"Odd story, difficult to follow"
You may be right, I tried to postpone telling the reality, to the point when everyone found their places. Thanks for the comment.
Good story.
Great narratives.
It's to me is a BBC story.
Can also be under FOOT FETISH.
A bit of lesbian touch.
And some degree of cheating.
Loving wife?
All is well, only negative comment - the length. The description of Petra about the other woman could have drastically reduced.
At best 4 pages, about 10 - 12,000 words would have been an ideal one.
I read all the 10 pages with patience
Because I'm a die hard foot fetish person.
I adore, admire, worship a woman's feet.
A woman with beautiful feet is a TRUE GODDESS!!!
But from that front It's a bit dissapointed.
Feet fetish is fine with me, but not under domination and discipline.
"Feet fetish is fine with me, but not under domination and discipline"
Any part of a woman is fine with me. But with a domineering woman, many times more interesting. In real life, it may not be that desirable but in a story it's harmless.
And for the long writing issue, I agree. I'm trying to find the balance there.
Thanks for the comment.
Holy shit. I didn't know. I didn't know a story could be this good. I'm not even a foot person. I feel like this could be a film. Like, a bad filmmaker could make it trashy, but a great filmmaker could make one of the best erotic thrillers of all time. Congrats! I was hooked!