by Kristanna
Please research how being transgender actually works if you're going to write about a trans character, there were a lot of inaccuracies in this that took away from the story. You seemed to be confused as to whether the character was ftm or mtf, and referred to them as 'she' anyway despite the later implication that they were ftm.
I really liked that story, i'm curious to know how she got those "new" powers e hopd fgaf she doesn't grow too big...like any more than that
Truth be told I don't really know if this will continue anywhere, it was a one-shot type of thing. I may write more with the same character in another context or doing big time jumps... not sure though.
Thanks for the feedback.