All Comments on 'Alcove Escapades.02 Alt Perspective'

Fun, sexy, and imaginative glimpse into an alternate perspective of a scene, which added dimension and texture to the original story. Great job!

Hot story, great imagination

Short, Hot, Fun. Great imagery and development

Num, fun & sexy, 5*

I read this before the original, and liked it very much; I thought it well-written and erotic, but felt it could use more character development. Then, I read the original and have a much increased appreciation for this short alternative perspective snippet; the characters are well-developed in the main story, and this adds to it by layering human emotions and thoughts onto a side character. Well done, appreciate your writing and imagination.

Successful "experiment" resulting in an excellent short work. Love your imagination.

Excellent story snippet from an excellent writer!

Nice angle to get the perspective of a character who was nameless, faceless in the original. Prima writing!

Incredibly hot, deserves more than five stars!

Fantastic. Read them in order. Sent copies to my boyfriend in jail. He is begging for more. Will read the rest of your stories. Thanks for making it easy to find stories that he likes