Alex's Gifts Ch. 10

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Alex snuggled between her legs and reached up to stop her hand. "You have to be tender and soft. There are times when it's better to go hard and fast, but usually only at the end when you feel it's close. Here, take your finger," he grabbed her index finger by the second knuckle, "and slide it down here," he said while he pushed it into her clit. "There you go, that little guy is your most sensitive part, you have to be gentle with it and build your excitement. Sometimes it comes fast, and sometimes it takes a while. Everyone and every time are different."

Brittany nodded in understanding as she slowly ran her finger around her tender nub. "That's it, take your time, feel yourself and how your body responds to your touch," he said, watching her follow his instructions. She tilted her head back and caressed her folds, touching and feeling her private places unabashedly for the first time. "Now when girls get excited, they usually get wet. Do you feel yourself getting wet, Brittany? Slide your finger down and check." Following his instructions, she probed between her lips and looked at Alex in surprise.

"You're right, I can feel it. It's...different," she said, continuing to explore herself.

"That means you're getting more excited. If you want, you can slide your finger in, it shouldn't hurt now that you're wet," Alex said and watched her tenderly probe between her petals and slide her finger into her opening. "That's it. Some girls like that a lot, but not everyone's the same. You just have to experiment and find out what you like. That's most of the fun."

"Oh Alex, this feels so good." She slid one finger in and out of herself while massaging her clit with her other hand.

"You can speed up if your body is telling you it can take more," he said.

"Yes, it wants more," she said, obviously referring to her cunt. She drove her finger in fast and hard now, rubbing furiously like she was at the start. In no time she gasped and made eye contact with Alex while she felt herself come for the third time. "Oh, I can feel it happening inside me," she said.

"Congratulations, you just learned how to masturbate," Alex said with a smile.

"Thank you, Alex, this means so much to me. I always thought boys were bad, and touching myself was bad, but how can that be? I feel so good and I know you'd never hurt me," she said in a calm voice as the realization of her sexuality washed over her.

"I'm happy for you," he said. "Let me do one more thing I think you'll really like." Not waiting for a response, Alex again opened Brittany's pale legs wide, except this time he approached with his face instead of a hand. He felt Brittany grip his hair as she had in the pool as he nuzzled into her smoothness. Alex flicked out his tongue and worked it through her folds and around her sensitive nub.

"Oh Alex, this is even better," Brittany said while panting and holding his head between her legs.

Alex licked her up and down, probing every crease and fold. He entered her with his tongue and covered his face with her scent. For the next ten minutes, he gave her poor attention-starved body as much love and affection as he could manage, bringing her to orgasm multiple times. After her sixth since entering the tub, he was forced to stop by a cramp in his neck.

As he stood to stretch Brittany looked up at him from her perch on the edge and said, "I had no idea I could feel this good." She looked at his cock then, less than a foot from her face, and said: "Let me make you feel good too." Remembering what Megan and Casey had done in the pool, she lifted his stiffness and wrapped her mouth around it. It was big and she had a hard time at first.

"Careful with your teeth. They can feel good, but only a little bit," he said. "Focus on the tip and use your tongue," he instructed. As she circled his sensitive head he groaned and said, "Yes, that's it. Now grab me with your hand," again, she did as told. Instinct began to kick in as she stroked his shaft and moved her mouth along his cock, licking around his ridges with her tongue. "That's it, that's perfect, don't stop," Alex said in a strained voice. A few moments later he felt himself reaching release and said, "Ok, I'm going to come."

Brittany released him with an untrained slurp and said, "I want to see it again," and stroked him like she did in the pool, hard and fast and focused on his tip. Moments later she felt him tense and watched his white stuff shoot out onto her. His first and strongest stream hit her chin and she quickly used a free hand to push the sticky goo into her mouth. His next spurts landed lower on her breasts.

Brittany eventually released him and rubbed his seed into her shallow chest with both hands, focusing contact on her sensitive nipples and then pausing to lick her fingers. "Thank you, Brittany, that did make me feel good," he said smiling down at her. He dropped into the water and pulled her down. She turned and slid back between his legs, feeling his stiffness against her back. He reached around and cupped her small breasts, caressing and cleaning his mess off her soft skin.

Alex kissed her neck softly and said, "Are you ready to show the girls your new bikini? There's still plenty of party left."

"This feels so nice Alex, I like when you hold me," Brittany sighed heavily. Alex let her relax against him for a while and enjoy all of the new sensations. He was happy that he'd passed Carrie's latest test, but he was much more satisfied that he was able to help Brittany love herself. Several minutes later she said, "Ok, let's go back to the party."

Alex got out first and toweled off as Brittany admired his naked body. He pulled on his pink thong, tucking himself away, and reached out a hand to Brittany, still soaking in the tub. She stood with his help and he handed her a fresh towel. Once she was dry, she slipped on the thong and looked at herself in the mirror. "Yes, this is perfect!" she exclaimed. She turned and looked over her shoulder, admiring her cute dimples and bare butt.

Alex reached between her legs and ran his palm along her smooth sex. "I agree, it is perfect, no hairs anywhere," he said while she whimpered softly. He kissed her neck, then she turned and locked with his lips for several moments before reaching for the door. "Don't you want this?" Alex asked, holding up her top.

"Do you want me to wear it?" she asked with a frown, suddenly afraid he didn't like her small breasts.

"Oh, absolutely not," he said with a grin, tossing it over his shoulder and marveling at her transformation.

"That's what I thought," she said over her shoulder as an entirely new Brittany emerged to join the party.

And what a party it was. Alex with his arm around Brittany, each wearing only a skimpy thong, walked into the living room to find Megan moaning on her back on the sofa with his sister's head buried between her legs. Sonya sat opposite them watching, her crimson bikini pulled aside and three fingers pressed between her legs. She glanced up in fright when Alex walked in and quickly made herself half decent. Alex put a hand down and nodded, silently telling her it was ok.

Unable to contain her excitement, Brittany looked at the couch and said "Wow! Look at them," probably louder than she needed to. Megan's eyes popped open and Casey sat up in surprise. Sonya snorted in laughter and continued probing between her legs.

"Don't let us stop you, ladies. You look like you're enjoying yourselves," Alex said with a big grin.

"Oh, Alex, I was so turned on after watching you and Casey," Megan said with a flushed face.

"It's true. When I came out they were already going at it. They've been like this for at least twenty minutes," the sexy redhead said, her tanned leg draped provocatively over the arm of her chair.

"Oh my God, look at Brittany," Casey said. She hopped up and ran over to her friend. "You look amazing!" she said, admiring her topless form and thong bikini. "Turn around!" Brittany did as asked. "Look at that ass! It's so squeezable," Casey said with glee while testing her theory.

Brittany giggled and shook her butt in Casey's hands. "Alex helped make me sexy! I'm so happy!" the tremoring blonde said.

"I just showed her what she already was." Alex said with a grin, adding "Oh and going topless was her idea."

"I want to be topless too!" said Megan excitedly. "C'mon Casey, let's go change." Casey nodded enthusiastically and bolted upstairs with her friend. Sonya raised a questioning gaze to Alex and he nodded. The redhead stood up, grabbed her bag from the foyer. Alex stared as Sonya's curves glided up the stairs after the two slender gymnasts.

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NLDomNLDomover 1 year ago

Carrie will be very impressed with the progress Alex has made in dealing with the women in his life. To those who have criticized the story line, I question their reading comprehension. Sonya showed her colors as being cruel, manipulative and in need of an "attitude adjustment".. Sonya became a better friend to all after Alex forcefully put her in her place. Strong 5 STAR rating, please keep it coming!

josenussbaumjosenussbaumabout 2 years ago

First Alex humiliates Sonya, than he rapes her (although Sonya was quite a nice girl in previous chapter). Yes, RAPE.

Second he is so nice and sweet with brittany. Go figure...

Obviously he had sex with Jenny. i bet he'll have sex with every female he encounters between 18 and mom's age.

As is typical in literotica nobody will say NO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, after reading the chapter I was very disappointed. assuming I may have misinterpreted his behavior, I read all the comments and all of the authors replies.

while from your comments, I get what you were trying to do with his character development, you just plain missed the mark. I agree completely with the others constructive criticism and add mine to the list. Wretched Monkey said it perfectly. I agree with him on every point. You managed to turn Alex into an arrogant unlikeable asshat. throwing money around like its what matters, grudge fucking one of his sisters friends because he feels he deserves to make a point, stealing underwear from any girl he can, violating privacy, installing hidden cameras with audio. fucking around with his sister. Money doesn't make you a good person. Because he certainly isn't. you have turned him into an irredeemable piece of shit. saying he will see the light and improve, or try to make it good??? Seriously? with all these young girls, no way. There are way too many first times for things with all these impressionable girls. they never get another chance for a first. you don't always get a do over in life, just because he sees the error of his ways and tries to make god on it. Sorry, this has gotten fucked up. I hope you fix it, but I won't see it.

I'm out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

Well, I'm at the end of chapter 10 and I'm still impressed. Like the characters and the way you are leading them into the story. Very hot! And I like the way you leave the openings in the story so the reader doesn't now which way you will take this. I look forward to reading more chapters and seeing where this goes. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is a fantastic series. I’ve loved every chapter and can’t wait to read the next. You’ve got this panty-covered cock hooked.

I don’t want to beat a dead horse but do agree that this chapter took an abrupt turn. Some additional character development would help with the transition as we see Alex go through a myriad of changes emotionally.

If I had to pick between Sonya and Britt I would suggest Sonya. Let’s see how creative they can get with pleasuring each other. I also look forward to the development of Jennifer. I’m curious to see how that relationship develops and if there is opportunity for Alex to become more exclusive.

MagnusRhodesMagnusRhodesover 5 years agoAuthor
Re: A follow up...

Hate fucking is a tad strong way to describe what he did. Sonya knew what she was doing and certainly wasn't unwilling. Maybe reluctant, but not forced, I tried my best to make that clear.

I get what you're saying. Ten chapters in and our boy decides to bust his nut in a bad girl's ass. I don't have a rebuttal for that. It is what it is. Call it his first time if you want, but I'm not going to. He's got a lot more left to give.

Thanks again for the feedback and please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Waiting for next part

When are you releasing the next part?

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyover 5 years ago
A follow up...

But he still has his first experience of sexual penetration, hate fucking a moderately unwilling girls arsehole? That's how he lost his virginity? I want to get that straight, because even if it wasn't 'against her will', it wasn't what she wanted and he manipulated her into going along with it. All those willing girls and that's how he popped his cherry? Up until now, he's had tit-jobs, blow-jobs, hand-jobs and been ground on but his dick hadn't gone in a pussy or an arse. I just find it strange that this is what he'd do.

I know you're trying to validate this swing from shy nerdy virgin to strong, powerful, rich, charming, swimmer with a string of fuck-buddies but there's something missing, at least to me. I mean, up until the party preparations, he's just been going with the flow, then all of a sudden he starts flashing his wealth and starts acting like Don Juan. Maybe as you say you've been a little too enthusiastic with your editing and the history in your head explains these things but the switch and some of his moral choices don't seem healthy or natural.

MagnusRhodesMagnusRhodesover 5 years agoAuthor
Re: Identity Crisis

@WretchedMonkey - Some fantastic points, thanks. Carrie has indeed created a monster, but it wasn't my intention for him to come off as a sociopath. Quite the opposite, actually. In his mind, he was helping both girls, albeit using completely different methods. That was the point of this chapter, to show a juxtaposition in his behavior - a good/bad light/dark side - but still with the intention of doing good.

He may have forced Sonya to a degree, but he gave her an out, multiple in fact - "He didn’t want to truly force himself on her. He could never do that." She knew the second time that she was doing something wrong and expected/wanted Alex to respond accordingly after their first encounter. His own actions were a surprise to him, but I think some of that may have gotten lost in editing when I cut out a few redundancies. I originally had him spending more time in reflection after what he did, but I didn't like how it read, it came across more as self-pity or insecurity rather than shock at the way he acted. It didn't fit at all.

An identity crisis a good way of putting it. It's been hard to get that across without it seeming like a contrived plot point or just plain bad character development. Without revealing too much from chapters to come, I'll just say that what Carrie did really did change him. He's not the same person that he was and he's coming to grips with that, sometimes without fully realizing what he's doing. He's going to have a long chat with her soon and all will become clear, for better or worse.

Looking back, I should have spent more time developing his character before that night on the couch to make it clear that although he is an awkward virgin when it comes to pretty girls, he is not entirely inexperienced, nor is he awkward around everyone. I'd also expound on how/why he's kept his financial status a secret, and that his recent playboy tendencies are humbly intended to help his friends and family, and are not meant to be manipulative or used to attract the opposite sex. I touched on this in chapter 9 when Jenny gets to know him, but it may have been too late by that point.

Thanks for the feedback!

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyover 5 years ago
Identity Crisis?

Soooo.... Alex, the 19 year old virgin, who's had a few sexual encounters recently with a spattering of (mostly) more experienced girls suddenly becomes a Dom and teaches less confident girls about their sexuality? Honestly I was puzzled through most of this chapter, I mean he was still a virgin before this and he had his first real sexual intercourse by punishing a girl with anal sex. He's never had sex before but used sex as a weapon, virtually raping a girl in the butt. Then behaved as if nothing happened and the girl learnt her lesson and was glad for it?

Aside from the all the playboy tendencies that have been cropping up, throwing his cash around, making extravagant gestures and playing up to the ladies, this chapter really took a departure from the character that has been apparent in the previous chapters, and it's a little unnerving. I mean, up until a few weeks ago, Alex would actively avoid girls (and most people) and now he's actively pursuing them, propositioning them and forcing them into sexual acts? This seems like the beginnings of some sort of sociopathic tendencies arising in him. Is that what you're going for? Has Carrie created a monster? A shy and socially awkward teen is shown that he shouldn't feel awkward as he's desirable and is shown how to use his charm to lure others into giving him what he wants? Well, that would leave me cold.

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