All Comments on 'Alice's Night Out'

All these stories like this always fantasize about big dicks, never normal. Seriously what are the chances she's at a bar and meets a guy to bang, then bangs several more all with big dicks?? The chances would be so miniscule. What was the the bar called, "Logs" or something?? Then hubby gets to come home to a cavernous abyss, great. Gets old of the same ol same ol.

The story has a lot of imagery in the phrasing. But that's all there is. It's not a complete story. There's very little build-up, and not ending. It just stops.