I think your story is really great satire. It reminds me a lot of brave New world, but with fucking. And humor! I'm surprised, tho, that it didn't go in the Humor & Satire category.
I started writing smuterature because I had three big stories I wanted to tell: The Cursed Cunt (a story about vocation, betrayal, guilt and redemption) A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore (a story about addiction, relationship abuse, and revenge) and my no...