by ctarrantella
It seems like the sex is a bit begrudging... Try to romance her, starting from first thing in the morning with her coffee. Ask about her day. Smack her butt. Kiss her neck. Compliment her. Do these things and more every day so she know she is the centre of your universe and you will be the centre of hers.
Story-wise, slow down the narrative. Describe her; the eyes, the lips, the hair, the clothes. Tell us about the tone of her voice, the flash in her eyes, the goosebumps, and the quivers.
Great story! Glad you are back and were able to mutually please each other!