All Comments on 'All Expenses Paid Ch. 01'

Gotta laugh about the premise of the plot and the timing of your story.

A cautionary tale for us young married couples as we prepare for the Christmas season? Looking forward to the rest.

I gave this chapter a "5" as it is such plausible,well written opening to the start of a couple's journey into a series of trials,tribulations and dilemmas for them individually and as a couple.